His Cut Surf Riders MC Book 1 edition by River Cliffe Romance eBooks
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Zoe
When I first saw him, I knew I wanted him. His toned surfer body and vibrant green eyes made me hot in all the right places. The more we were together, the more I wanted him to be mine.
Chuck “NunChuck”
Mine. That’s the first thought that entered my mind when I saw her. She’s the most beautiful woman I’ve ever seen, with curves in all the right places. She makes me want…more. But just because you want something, doesn’t mean you can have it…
Who they are brought them together but threatens to tear them apart. Will their love bind them together? Or destroy them in the end?
His Cut Surf Riders MC Book 1 edition by River Cliffe Romance eBooks
I usually don't write reviews on books I read, but I feel as this is a new author and their first book, I figured I would put in my opinion.Like I said in the title, the story premise was spot on. MC biker falls for the VP's little sister, who is also the MC's mechanic. Great idea! But the story was so rushed that reading it gave me whiplash. There is promise here but the story could be more drawn out, more explanation and more character depth.
I almost felt like this was the first draft of a potentially amazing book. Some phrasing for me was too repetitious and took me out of the story line. For a first book though, definitely a good premise. I hope to see more explanation and dimensional characters in future books. Thanks!
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His Cut Surf Riders MC Book 1 edition by River Cliffe Romance eBooks Reviews
BOOK REVIEW......
First off let me just say the cover art is a major turn OFF. The guy looks like a middle aged man trying to look cool without a clue as to how to do it. The book was just okay. Nothing worth remembering.
NARRATOR REVIEW......
The narrator was okay also.
Imagine you pick up a teenage girls diary and just start reading. That's basically how this is written.
People are mentioned by name but no explanation on who they are. Things aren't described. The time line skips with no warning. It also needs some serious editing (ex "He has a huge grill that can hold enough food to feed an army, a pool, and even a waterfall.").
Explanations seen to be added as an afterthought. I mean the whole sister thing? Never saw that coming. There was nothing to even make me think there was a sister until it was added as a reason for the decision being what it was.
Otherwise this could be a great story.
Boy and girl meet and develop feelings for each other before finding out how they're connected.
It had a Romeo and Juliet thing to it that I enjoyed.
I had so many issues with this book. I am a huge fan of MC books, they are my favorite. This one was lacking. I didn't like the harshness of the female lead, she dropped the f-bomb way too much. I'm all for strong independent lead female characters but she was over the top. The male lead was too docile for my liking, I'm used to alpha males in the MC books I read. It's almost like the two characters should switch personalities. Also, the story was not believable. He was a part of her brother's MC for five years and she's never met him?!
For your first book I am so totally impressed and in awe. Great job. Great story . Hoping for more
While the story was very fast with everything happening, it was a good read. The relationship between all the characters in this book will have you laughing
What a new and exciting book. I've never read a story about an MC who are also surfers, way cool. I truly liked this story of Chuck and Zoe. What an exciting relationship. Can't wait to read more.
3.5-4 stars For a debut author this was a nice lil novella that I really enjoyed reading. While it may seemed a bit rushed, I had to remind myself that its a novella with it being 83 pages as I would have loved to see Zoe and Chucks relationship fleshed out a bit more. But good storyline and you can only get better as you grow. Good for you for putting yourself out there and definitely looking forward to more in this series.
I usually don't write reviews on books I read, but I feel as this is a new author and their first book, I figured I would put in my opinion.
Like I said in the title, the story premise was spot on. MC biker falls for the VP's little sister, who is also the MC's mechanic. Great idea! But the story was so rushed that reading it gave me whiplash. There is promise here but the story could be more drawn out, more explanation and more character depth.
I almost felt like this was the first draft of a potentially amazing book. Some phrasing for me was too repetitious and took me out of the story line. For a first book though, definitely a good premise. I hope to see more explanation and dimensional characters in future books. Thanks!
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